Look! a good twist story!
First, I want to explain that everyone have a very good twist story, but people have different favor. Therefore, I choose three twist stories which are most interesting to me. Of course mine has been eliminate at first, because that will be unfair to judge myself(HA HA ! I won’t tell you mine is the Best!)
The first one which attracts my interests is Sophia’s story. The title first appear appear to my eyes and give me a big question mark--Why she feature her father as biological? After following her words and description about how her father care about her, I even can feel it from the worlds her father tell her; such as “you naughty girl!”. It shows the care and love from her father. Suddenly, the twist come with out any warning; It comes too fast and I even don’t have time to prepare for it. It drag me out from the Korea romantics she create and throw me a feeling as same as her pictures which is on the bottom of her blog post. When I finish reading the story, I have the same feeling as she has and the only world I can give is “biological father” which fits her main ideal well.
The second one is Amanda’s story. She is really good at creating the environment and atmosphere of the story. Also the description on the reaction of people and her feeling at that time is really good. While I am reading the story, it seems to bring me to the same situation the girl in the story has. Also the way she put “I was frozen” as a separate paragraph is really novelty to me. It is like a stop sign in a song which gives you time to think about the story and keep on track on it. In addition, her ending is really unaffected; not like Sophia’s which changed suddenly, it change quietly and take times to understand and notice.
Third one is zen’s twit story about the wind. After he changed the sentence which said “wind bring us warmth in the winter” I feel much more comfortable reading it and choose it as the third twist story I like. One things really different his story is the using of “She” as a starting of each sentence; If only three or five sentence start with she, it will make feel that it repeats too much and need to be changed. However, if the whole story start with she, instead of feeling of repeat, I feel parallelism and poetic. In addition, I like his way of analogy the wind as his friend which gives the wind a personality.
As you can see, These are the story I like best among all the twist story except mine. They both have different twisting and because of that unique feeling they attract me successfully!
PS. Do we really need to add photos for these kind of blog?
PS2. If you don't understand my photo, ask my classmate! It fits Valentime's day perfectly!!!
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