The Only Way to Survive
“What time is it?” a man’s voice asked the question, “ It is 3 o’clock, 3 hours to the sun rise.” answered by a clear and melodious voice, it seemed to be a girls voice around 11 years old. “ Be well prepared, take everything you need and pack up. You need to learn how to take care of yourselves. Remember whatever happens you need to survive.” the man said seriously. His hand fatherly touch the girl’s faces seemed to mint-marking the girl in his mind.
This is 2015 February 31th, two month after the doomsday happened. Countless meteorites fall from space and hit the earth, lots of people died at that day, but that was not the end of nightmare. An unknown virus spread out from the meteorite, half of the people around world have infected the virus, and after one night they all turned to zombies, also the people killed by the meteorite revived to zombies, too. The government try to controlled the situation by sending out armies, unfortunately they failed and become the part of zombies. The only hope for people who’s trying to survive now is a rumor which said there is a palace in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean where is away from the zombies and dangers and full with delicious food and inexhaustible gold.
A man and a girl stand at the top of the building overlook the port which is 800m away from them. From the experience they learned by consuming thousands of humans lives, they know that the weakest time for zombies is the time when sun rise, they will run slower and lost part of senses. They need to under the cover of sun rise to cross through the way to the port which is crowded with thousands of zombies. Several hours later, “ run the sun is rising, I will take care of the zombies” the man’s said rapidly. A silhouette run out of the building with touches holding on the hand. It attract most of the zombies’ attention and run to the opposite way of the port. After a while a little silhouette run out of the building and goes straight away to the port.
Several years past people has taken back the ground which occupy by zombies. According to the owner of this painting said that this painting is painted a women who survived from zombies by drift in the sea on a small boat. It is her impression about the most important time in her life and the fire in the background of the painting become the only hope and support to stay alive when she draft alone in the sea.
It is a creative story with interesting content. You did a great job in creating plot. The good thing is that you explain what is the painting about according to your story. And yet, from my point of view, this draft lacks some details about the story , you can add more scenes that describe the zombies and infection. Generally speaking, you did a good job!
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