Monday, September 29, 2014

Letter to Jim(outline draft)



Hi Jim, I am a friend of your father. I heard about the story happened on you and I felt really disappointed. In my opinion, you did several things really wrong, and I am coming to remind you about them and giving some suggestions to you.

First, you should never trust other people easily without any research or decision by yourselves even he is your friend or relative. "You never know a person unless you walk in their shoes" (To Kill A Mockingbird) Be vigilant to the things that seems easy to achieve and money that seems easy to get. Remember it will never drop a pie from the sky. You earn from what you did, so never dream that good luck and good things  always happens on you. Therefore remember trust yourself never rely on other people, that will help you to avoid many trap and dangerous.

Second, Never forget to care about people who loves you and care about you, or you will lost more than just money. Although money is really important in our 

Finally, don't give up your dream. If people keep dreams in their heart and try their best to achieve them, dreams can be their support and lead people to succeed. Although you have lose everything, but you still have dream.

Never give up!

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