Tuesday, January 20, 2015

Grammar review

The dumplings, a Chinese traditional food especially in the north part of China, are regarded as a symbol of good luck during family reunions.
Sitting beside the dinning table, tear ran out of my eyes uncontrollably like a sudden downpour.
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  1. Jennifer GJanuary 20, 2015 at 10:17 AM

    Good revision. Two things:

    1) tearS ran out of my eyes
    2) dinner table or dining room table are better than dining table (which here is also misspelled).

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