“Leo you have 3 grammar mistakes in this sentence.” Every time before I handed in my blog post, this sentence jumped into my mind. It was our first blog post. previously, I never had any habit of checking the grammar mistakes I made for my writing. I thought after I came to an English environment country, my grammar would improve naturally. However, the facts proved that I was wrong. After 1 year of practiced as a freshman, I hand in my first blog post confidently as a sophomore. Unfortunately, it was still a failure; 3 mistakes in one sentence was the feedback I got from my ideas of “ Grammar skills will naturally improve by itself.” From then on, I knew that I needed to make changes; I read though my blog post every time before I handed in; I asked feedback from my earnest teacher “Ms. Guarino”; I exchanged my essays with my classmates and trying to find grammar mistakes for each other. Within the help from my writing class, I finally heard the feedback I wanted: “Leo your paragraph is good, unless a few grammar mistakes.” Although it was not as perfect as I expected, I felt I have improved a lot though the year. I am going to keep working on advanced my grammar skills in the future, and hopefully, I can get the feedback which is: “ Leo you have an amazing paragraph with no grammar mistakes!”
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