Tuesday, May 5, 2015

Brain storm about the intro paragraph

the brain storming
To talk about what I have accomplished during this year, it will be epic story about an evolved; from a student who only know to write a short paragraph to  a student who has no worried of writing a long essay. Um...Maybe I am not no worried, but be able to handle a longer essay.
As a result of that, let's see what has been taken place on me during this miracle year. First, my skills of using grammar correctly improved. Second, I can write more specific details instead of only doing the boring record. Third, my skills on sentence level has improved. Finally, I am getting used to write a longer essay which is really helpful to my future life in college or in the IB classes. As you can see, This is a big turning point for a student who used to only know about how to write a 60 words paragraph. I can't believe that I accomplish it and I am going to continue keeping up this spirit in the future.





























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