The very first thing which I am going to revised on my blog posts is the grammar problem.
Then I need to improve the sentence level for the blog posts which contain poems(1,2,9); I will improve the connection between poems and paragraphs; I will use better words and make sure I have enough supporting details for my main idea. Also I can use some quotes for hook and ending. For the ones which do not contain poems, I will use them to show what I have changed during the challenge and use better words and using quotes, and more person opinion. I also need to make sure if my writing is engaging to the reader and be fluently.
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